Kia ora. I am Emily from St Mary’s School. I liked how the colours were simple and not distracting. It reminded of how I tried to make a clay dog but it didn’t dry. Maybe you could proofread so it makes sense. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora. I am Emily from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how the colours were simple and not distracting.
It reminded of how I tried to make a clay dog but it didn’t dry.
Maybe you could proofread so it makes sense.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Emily